W From:	ADTSHR::SWALKER      "Sharon Walker - VAX BASIC/VAX SCAN"  9-MAR-1990 15:45:30.20  To:	4GL::ROCHESTER CC:	SWALKER # Subj:	errors in SCAN bookreader doc        Jon,  C 	Here are the errors I noted.  Additional errors may be forthcoming 1     for chapters 1-10, which Dennis is reviewing.   B 	Overall, it looks really good - and it's nice to see the SCAN docH     in bookreader form!  (I couldn't help myself and snitched a copy forH     my own use.  Needless to say, we'd like a copy of the final version       to post in our public area).   	Sharon       A 1.3.2	atXYZ (where XYZ is in boldface type) - should be separated   8 10	variablelines_per_page (where lines_per_page is bold) 10.2.4	isnot ('not' in bold)  E 11.1.3	(under FIND built-in token diagram):	')' is on a new line, by   	itself   @ 12.5	"..." is on a separate line in the Case-alternative exampleC 12.10	(in the START SCAN syntax diagram) ';' is on a line by itself E 12.12	macrofind (where find is in boldface type) -- this occurs twice     0 14.3	entry,function_code (function_code in bold) 	thevalue (value in bold)   C 16.2	(after CANCEL BREAK/EVENT=x):	'x' is on a separate line at the A 	beginning of a paragraph.  'Represents' (right after 'x') should  	have a lowercase 'r'.  E B.1.16	(in the START SCAN syntax diagram):	';' is on a line by itself B B.3.1	(in CONSTANT declaration example):	';' is on a separate lineH B.3.5	(in syntax diagrams for SYNTAX and TRIGGER macros):	'[picture] }'	B 	belongs on the previous line.  Also, if possible, there should beF 	an extra newline before the '...' that directly preceded 'END MACRO'.  E Figure F-2	As noted earlier, this doesn't seem to be the right figure 5 		(although I like it a lot on aesthetic grounds!...)   